tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post5849375812798647069..comments2023-07-05T08:00:09.960-04:00Comments on The Edge Of Silence: TimeKathryn Dychehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-52392346687524149022014-07-28T12:46:51.007-04:002014-07-28T12:46:51.007-04:00Thanks Gina, hope you are well.Thanks Gina, hope you are well.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-81925283603833292222014-07-28T12:46:39.208-04:002014-07-28T12:46:39.208-04:00I was trying the boomerang style but couldn't ...I was trying the boomerang style but couldn't quite get there with it. This was the end product. :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-81563869737293111672014-07-28T12:45:58.334-04:002014-07-28T12:45:58.334-04:00I know I discard too many . . . definitely need to...I know I discard too many . . . definitely need to rectify that. I love how observant you are.<br />Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-56623226181558964602014-07-28T12:44:55.061-04:002014-07-28T12:44:55.061-04:00Thank you StacyThank you StacyKathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-33556966930480028152014-07-28T12:24:02.862-04:002014-07-28T12:24:02.862-04:00hoping that i dont discard too many seconds in the...hoping that i dont discard too many seconds in the day without first taking the time to admire them....smiles...intriguing for in this...addressing the poem itself...giving it life....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-8500757180130415782014-07-25T11:38:01.946-04:002014-07-25T11:38:01.946-04:00this is really beautiful.
i think it drives home ...this is really beautiful.<br /><br />i think it drives home the true meaning of poetry and literature...how timeless the stories of language become. years and decades cannot dim.<br /><br />stacy lynn mar<br />http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-26785763985113903972014-07-24T12:50:25.776-04:002014-07-24T12:50:25.776-04:00Nice use of the poem introduced us at the IGWRT...Nice use of the poem introduced us at the IGWRT's! This has such a soft touch - a simplicity that offers hope.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-81301985550160085422014-07-24T11:09:38.358-04:002014-07-24T11:09:38.358-04:00Thanks Jeff, it's always great to hear which w...Thanks Jeff, it's always great to hear which words/stanzas resonate with people.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-83914948343214162972014-07-24T11:09:13.744-04:002014-07-24T11:09:13.744-04:00Thanks Grace, I felt like the repetition worked in...Thanks Grace, I felt like the repetition worked in this piece.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-44966390824954597032014-07-24T11:08:07.351-04:002014-07-24T11:08:07.351-04:00Thank you, took me a while to decide where I wante...Thank you, took me a while to decide where I wanted to go with this.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-50242009130902700252014-07-24T11:07:16.010-04:002014-07-24T11:07:16.010-04:00Thanks Mary . . . yes if only we could claim those...Thanks Mary . . . yes if only we could claim those precious seconds.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-39225037920995953052014-07-24T11:06:49.624-04:002014-07-24T11:06:49.624-04:00Thank you . . . I was struggling with this one for...Thank you . . . I was struggling with this one for a while.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-58056209418020095942014-07-24T11:06:15.778-04:002014-07-24T11:06:15.778-04:00Thank you Sumana . . . Thank you Sumana . . . Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-84416343527209359612014-07-24T11:04:38.220-04:002014-07-24T11:04:38.220-04:00Thank you. :)
Thank you. :)<br />Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-86988356625037658082014-07-24T10:36:00.214-04:002014-07-24T10:36:00.214-04:00This poem is breathtakingly beautiful...! 'Tur...This poem is breathtakingly beautiful...! 'Turns down into feathered wings healing illusions as it flies'... such lovely sentiments! Very well written! :-)Madhurahttp://meetmissmoody.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-70876908248339769362014-07-24T03:59:07.483-04:002014-07-24T03:59:07.483-04:00what an amazing poem of truth...'healing illus...what an amazing poem of truth...'healing illusions'...though feathered but not so soft..Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-60979299716086196122014-07-23T23:11:37.309-04:002014-07-23T23:11:37.309-04:00oh...and how amazingly it soars. oh...and how amazingly it soars. RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-45854505285905633902014-07-23T21:16:28.624-04:002014-07-23T21:16:28.624-04:00So many seconds discarded every day. If only we c...So many seconds discarded every day. If only we could claim those seconds and change them into minutes, then hours! I really like the way you wrote this poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-62121344329158559842014-07-23T18:33:22.944-04:002014-07-23T18:33:22.944-04:00Very well done! That first stanza really speaks to...Very well done! That first stanza really speaks to me--a beautiful image. Great work here!Jeffhttps://mytinythroes.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-17170815422978686942014-07-23T18:15:33.586-04:002014-07-23T18:15:33.586-04:00Such a lovely response Kathryn ~ I like the use o...Such a lovely response Kathryn ~ I like the use of repetition and specially the last one - being a feathered wings healing illusions at it flies ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-48887000138828414782014-07-23T17:30:22.221-04:002014-07-23T17:30:22.221-04:00What a great take on the prompt...such a cool pers...What a great take on the prompt...such a cool perspective.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-8209934111088991082014-07-23T16:37:47.370-04:002014-07-23T16:37:47.370-04:00Thanks . . . was struggling with the boomerang pro...Thanks . . . was struggling with the boomerang prompt from the other day but it kind of worked its way into one anyhow.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-77485336366022400542014-07-23T16:22:54.909-04:002014-07-23T16:22:54.909-04:00very cool kathryn - love all the things it can be ...very cool kathryn - love all the things it can be and is and how it develops a life on its own as wellClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-48049362587001782132014-07-23T16:19:48.940-04:002014-07-23T16:19:48.940-04:00Kathryn, this is the poem...! That's a stellar...Kathryn, this is the poem...! That's a stellar use of repetition to create a mood, a statement. The last stanza is my fav. Reversing time.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-76730711449747199932014-07-23T15:29:41.573-04:002014-07-23T15:29:41.573-04:00WOW!!!!!!! I LOVE this! especially the down turnin...WOW!!!!!!! I LOVE this! especially the down turning into feathered wings "healing illusion as it flies". Fantastic write, my friend!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com