tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post6039955031576080911..comments2023-07-05T08:00:09.960-04:00Comments on The Edge Of Silence: Bound Tightly OpenKathryn Dychehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-29222891548001234982014-11-26T20:09:43.410-05:002014-11-26T20:09:43.410-05:00Love the descriptive lines! Brilliantly set Kathry...Love the descriptive lines! Brilliantly set Kathryn! Makes me want to find more usage on similar words!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-57420991071691324432014-11-26T13:14:44.648-05:002014-11-26T13:14:44.648-05:00this is so esoteric and beautiful. i especially l...this is so esoteric and beautiful. i especially love that third stanza!Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-50094127183313909772014-11-26T12:29:50.352-05:002014-11-26T12:29:50.352-05:00Some very intriguing lines in this piece, Kathryn....Some very intriguing lines in this piece, Kathryn...."key to a lockless room"....and especially "bound tightly open". Your art work is eloquent, too, as always.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-65990846411282082862014-11-26T09:44:40.494-05:002014-11-26T09:44:40.494-05:00I liked the way you played with words. The third s...I liked the way you played with words. The third stanza is my favorite.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-21439408181624894112014-11-25T23:15:34.208-05:002014-11-25T23:15:34.208-05:00So powerful. And that art piece is a true stunner....So powerful. And that art piece is a true stunner.Sethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05870075379758015838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-58950588303872675902014-11-25T17:31:15.579-05:002014-11-25T17:31:15.579-05:00i like the contradictions in this...pained by the ...i like the contradictions in this...pained by the strength of scars...bound open...<br />hands have much to tell....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-16198071153125061592014-11-25T15:40:26.200-05:002014-11-25T15:40:26.200-05:00 a fingerprint
in a sea of hands
pained
by the str... a fingerprint<br />in a sea of hands<br />pained<br />by the strength of scars.... i found that stanza particularly strong cause it shows both, the fragility and the strengthClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-77966436864456785182014-11-25T13:32:10.229-05:002014-11-25T13:32:10.229-05:00Thank you . . . it took a while to write this piec...Thank you . . . it took a while to write this piece but I'm glad it finally came to fruition.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-44478636574845997612014-11-25T13:31:30.938-05:002014-11-25T13:31:30.938-05:00Thank you Myrna, seems to be the way my mind work...Thank you Myrna, seems to be the way my mind works these days. :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-57319574260195710152014-11-25T10:30:42.310-05:002014-11-25T10:30:42.310-05:00Yes, sometimes those old wounds are fastened so ti...Yes, sometimes those old wounds are fastened so tightly they stay open. I love the words here, the contrasts and the profound thinking they inspire.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-25290104968752995042014-11-25T08:44:48.223-05:002014-11-25T08:44:48.223-05:00Quite a vivid and powerful piece.
"the end ...Quite a vivid and powerful piece. <br /><br />"the end of beginnings<br />the beginning of ends"<br /><br />and<br /><br />"label adhered wounds<br />full-mouthed and slipping<br />stitched up , threaded<br />bound tightly open" - Loved these lines.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-53904827007509781092014-11-25T06:58:40.104-05:002014-11-25T06:58:40.104-05:00Thank you. Thank you. Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-82929599609398204852014-11-25T06:33:16.415-05:002014-11-25T06:33:16.415-05:00i think the use of contrast is working well.
some...i think the use of contrast is working well. <br />some very intriguing words, fits the picture of the hand sculpture perfectly. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-81424468139518309162014-11-25T01:25:01.243-05:002014-11-25T01:25:01.243-05:00What great use of contrast. The sense of helplessn...What great use of contrast. The sense of helplessness goes right into the bone.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-74942292058828874712014-11-25T01:19:47.352-05:002014-11-25T01:19:47.352-05:00I love the contradictions here...just like love.I love the contradictions here...just like love.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-19823161717133230482014-11-24T23:02:49.906-05:002014-11-24T23:02:49.906-05:00Great poem. I like the rhythmGreat poem. I like the rhythmGen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-73936930908580436592014-11-24T22:50:15.169-05:002014-11-24T22:50:15.169-05:00a perfect circle.
felt like it never ends.. unli...a perfect circle. <br /><br />felt like it never ends.. unlike life. great wordstotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-10616244903009358472014-11-24T21:08:46.931-05:002014-11-24T21:08:46.931-05:00Beginnings and endings, as you so beautifully demo...Beginnings and endings, as you so beautifully demonstrate Kathryn, are bound together. This poem lingers...in its pain. Not all endings are great, not all beginnings are fine.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-14772150125533336602014-11-24T19:44:24.398-05:002014-11-24T19:44:24.398-05:00The contrasts work well. I find the last stanza es...The contrasts work well. I find the last stanza especially intriguing.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-17405228639588639122014-11-24T17:28:09.286-05:002014-11-24T17:28:09.286-05:00Thank you Cara, sorry you've been made to feel...Thank you Cara, sorry you've been made to feel this way.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-20046662219373760082014-11-24T17:27:25.541-05:002014-11-24T17:27:25.541-05:00Thanks Kerry . . . I wrote the title a long time a...Thanks Kerry . . . I wrote the title a long time ago but hadn't been able to incorporate it into a poem until now. Love how you link my poetry to abstract art.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-12887662761715474122014-11-24T17:25:57.346-05:002014-11-24T17:25:57.346-05:00Thanks Sumana, I've been waiting to use Bound ...Thanks Sumana, I've been waiting to use Bound Tightly Open for so long . . . was finally able to pull it together.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-1124789298402702032014-11-24T17:25:10.978-05:002014-11-24T17:25:10.978-05:00I love playing with contrasts, ambiguity and oxmym...I love playing with contrasts, ambiguity and oxmymorons . . . it seems to be where I am in my mind right now. Thanks BjornKathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-48986194688305394362014-11-24T16:01:27.783-05:002014-11-24T16:01:27.783-05:00I have been feeling a bit of this lately. Beautifu...I have been feeling a bit of this lately. Beautiful art and words.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-24388752174469747882014-11-24T13:31:41.707-05:002014-11-24T13:31:41.707-05:00loved it but it left me in limbo where keys are us...loved it but it left me in limbo where keys are useless<br /><br />graciasMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.com