tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post9007637974118372408..comments2023-07-05T08:00:09.960-04:00Comments on The Edge Of Silence: Dead Man WalkingKathryn Dychehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-50014084183447992512014-11-08T10:16:41.602-05:002014-11-08T10:16:41.602-05:00foreboding . . . yes :)foreboding . . . yes :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-82879537469037856872014-11-08T10:14:59.028-05:002014-11-08T10:14:59.028-05:00Thanks Michael for such a lovely comment.Thanks Michael for such a lovely comment.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-79644110926526095452014-11-08T00:53:46.439-05:002014-11-08T00:53:46.439-05:00I quite admire the cadence in this - it supports a...I quite admire the cadence in this - it supports and enriches the pen ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-86869367209745721682014-11-07T21:00:16.391-05:002014-11-07T21:00:16.391-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-89917265907555897322014-11-07T17:37:55.077-05:002014-11-07T17:37:55.077-05:00this poem left me with a dark foreboding that sort...this poem left me with a dark foreboding that sorta said 'see here, what can happen.' <br /><br />haunting, dark, and lovely!Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-84476719370236300862014-11-06T16:52:09.929-05:002014-11-06T16:52:09.929-05:00From the first line, a contradiction in terms - so...From the first line, a contradiction in terms - somehow full of life although very dead.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-72578939174279419392014-11-06T08:53:29.811-05:002014-11-06T08:53:29.811-05:00Thanks Sherry :)Thanks Sherry :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-25679272730194173352014-11-06T08:52:15.795-05:002014-11-06T08:52:15.795-05:00thank you Sumana, I agonized over that line hoping...thank you Sumana, I agonized over that line hoping it might convey some of the energy that the dead leave behind.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-71760447681712176702014-11-06T04:57:55.687-05:002014-11-06T04:57:55.687-05:00"the vibrating pulse of a static heart" ..."the vibrating pulse of a static heart" a fantastic contrast...the shadow man bears it in his sunless existence, all the pulsating memories of life & we are like that dead man sometimes...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-47701445483641973612014-11-05T22:12:13.953-05:002014-11-05T22:12:13.953-05:00So true, the "mourning rising each generation...So true, the "mourning rising each generation".....great lines, Kathryn!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-24135794830818763742014-11-05T20:55:56.629-05:002014-11-05T20:55:56.629-05:00The more I read these dead man poems, the more I l...The more I read these dead man poems, the more I look over my shoulder to see the shadow world beneath the matrix. Can it be inhabited by non-hungry zombies? Which is more alive--what lives in the grey or one who dreams beyond it? Mysterious and spooky.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-38081139386839241042014-11-05T19:42:26.471-05:002014-11-05T19:42:26.471-05:00To feel alive and joy is the answer whichever road...To feel alive and joy is the answer whichever road you take.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-75153730734661356582014-11-05T18:23:22.344-05:002014-11-05T18:23:22.344-05:00hoping the balance tips in that favor. :)hoping the balance tips in that favor. :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-78003071291468183822014-11-05T18:22:16.386-05:002014-11-05T18:22:16.386-05:00Thank you.Thank you.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-28475975024919460412014-11-05T18:21:56.237-05:002014-11-05T18:21:56.237-05:00Thanks, like that you got mystical from it.Thanks, like that you got mystical from it.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-42048392594146218772014-11-05T18:21:25.755-05:002014-11-05T18:21:25.755-05:00Thanks Truedessa . . . always that struggle betwee...Thanks Truedessa . . . always that struggle between light and dark.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-49183114283197534122014-11-05T17:33:47.891-05:002014-11-05T17:33:47.891-05:00A powerful opening line I think it might be best t...A powerful opening line I think it might be best to make amends if you can before you pass<br />to the other side. I like the way you weaved some light into this dark piece.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-72272373934842495062014-11-05T15:57:55.539-05:002014-11-05T15:57:55.539-05:00The beginning hooked me in. It reads like a chant ...The beginning hooked me in. It reads like a chant with a mystical, eerie tone. I loved the last two lines.. :-)<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-22776513695805554212014-11-05T11:53:33.347-05:002014-11-05T11:53:33.347-05:00Drat! My comment was lost. Let's see whether...Drat! My comment was lost. Let's see whether I can recreate it. The colors you chose here really enhanced the feeling of emptiness and death. Although I know we'll all have griefs and regrets at the end of our lives, hopefully they'll be outweighed by the joys and opportunities taken.<br /><br />janetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-176186203016222842014-11-05T11:39:19.038-05:002014-11-05T11:39:19.038-05:00yes - I agree that the choice made this richyes - I agree that the choice made this richAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-1269549803525005622014-11-05T11:14:09.229-05:002014-11-05T11:14:09.229-05:00the stench of death can be overwhelming . . . turk...the stench of death can be overwhelming . . . turkey vultures are obviously immune. :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-33053373572447766062014-11-05T11:11:18.311-05:002014-11-05T11:11:18.311-05:00always in the shadowsalways in the shadowsKathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-20906731423823673062014-11-05T11:11:00.698-05:002014-11-05T11:11:00.698-05:00to live on through our words . . . I hope so.to live on through our words . . . I hope so.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-19321433375919040432014-11-05T11:10:27.355-05:002014-11-05T11:10:27.355-05:00So true.So true.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918334757012103109.post-60275650292683009652014-11-05T11:09:09.065-05:002014-11-05T11:09:09.065-05:00Thanks Myrna, it's been a while but I was insp...Thanks Myrna, it's been a while but I was inspired.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.com