textured stock image by Mark Douglas
submerged
in the cold chill
of my own sweat
limbs kicking and flailing
failing
in time stretched eternity
pulse pounding
thrashing and shaking
the cage that confines
demons gorge on dreams
on fear
on ragged breath
on primal screams
mare in my night
eyes wild, sensing danger
bolt towards waking
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they gorge on fear...yes... and it's a downward spiral...ugh... hate those nightmares....didn't have one in a long time luckily...
ReplyDeleteugh...my son had them when he was young...it was terrifying for me as a parent to see him go through them as well...shivers....
ReplyDeleteOh, yes... this is intense!
ReplyDeleteI can feel the heart-pounding fear in this, Kathryn!
ReplyDeleteIt can take a while for the pounding heart to return to a regular rhythm.
DeleteOh I think everyone can relate to this - a horrible nightmare that seems to keep on going sometimes even after you wake!
ReplyDeleteout, damn mare ~
ReplyDeleteVery powerful and vivid nightmare! I hope you do not have them too often.
ReplyDeleteI go through phases where I have them frequently and then have a bit of a respite before they return. I often wake up screaming and frighten the crap out of my husband.
DeleteThe way a night-mare rides us.. the sweat the tangled bed-sheets.. this is an ugly mare if there ever was one.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful and frightening. You pull us in to this dream- and sweat-soaked world.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I should repel you rather than pull you in, not a fun place to be. :)
DeleteHow frightening if you are experiencing these night terrors ~ Demons gorge on dreams, that line jumped out for me ~ Take care Kathryn ~
ReplyDeleteThanks, think they are a side effect of the medication I'm on for my nerve pain.
DeleteNothing worse. I'm grateful they don't happen often. Last night I dreamed I was playing a soccer game. Ha. Ha.
ReplyDeleteYou write so beautifully, this poem is so evocative & the image goes perfectly with it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leanne
DeleteO, dear...Kathryn, please, get one of those Indians Dream Catcher. Mush help! Thinking about you...Blessings! <3
ReplyDelete* Must, not mush ....
DeleteO, dear...Kathryn, please, get one of those Indians Dream Catcher. Mush help! Thinking about you...Blessings! <3
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love that last stanza. So vivid!
ReplyDeletePowerful images - frighteningly beautiful. I like your play on "nightmare" in this year of the horse! Kudos!
ReplyDeleteso powerful
ReplyDeleteOh, those are such heart-stopping moments. You expressed them so beautifully! And your artwork is stunning! I will enjoy browsing your galleries, Kathryn.
ReplyDeleteWhat a vivid description of nightmares/ night terrors.
ReplyDeleteAnd I decided it's about time I start following you!
ReplyDeleteDo dreams carry messages or are they just our subconscious mind working out our daily problems? My dreams have been vivid lately.
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