patience torments with promises of tomorrow
although strength extends a friendly hand
frustration invites you in for a brew
whilst tiredness squishes you tight
whilst tiredness squishes you tight
change wanders absent mindedly
as life kicks balance out from under you
as life kicks balance out from under you
Very moody texturing. Nice work. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tammy
DeleteStrange and eerie processing. But, interesting.
ReplyDeleteEarl
Thanks Earl, I'll take strange and eerie.
DeleteWow! What a writer you are--love the poetry!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dianne.
DeleteSomeone taught me that patience is something learned. xo
ReplyDeleteI am sure that your situation, recovering from your surgery, calls for lots and lots of patience - may it fill you as you continue to heal.
ReplyDeleteVery true Brenda, although it's a tough one to learn.
DeleteThat image is so compelling and blends so well with the text too.
ReplyDeleteYou just described my yesterday, powerful words :) T.
ReplyDeleteInteresting image! Very moody and expressive.
ReplyDeleteI think I was put on this earth to learn patience.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words... and that texture is divine!