Monday, September 9, 2013

I Remember


memories of being kissed
gut like a clenched fist
or was it more like butterflies
the deceit, the lies


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15 comments:

  1. GailSeptember 9, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Beautifully sad.

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  2. aspiritofsimplicitySeptember 9, 2013 at 4:07 PM

    I suppose that there are kisses that lie. The bible says that Judas betrayed with a kiss.

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  3. GraceSeptember 9, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    a clenched fist, deceit & lies - such memories of the kiss we would rather forget ~ happy day to you, smiles ~

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  4. NancySeptember 9, 2013 at 8:17 PM

    There's a story behind those rhymes... I hope it happened long ago. xo

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  5. Brian MillerSeptember 9, 2013 at 10:05 PM

    oh now that end puts a twist on it now doesnt it...
    first kisses are so full of angst and expectation...
    there is still magic in them though...smiles.

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  6. bgottsabSeptember 10, 2013 at 7:42 AM

    Your pieces are always so heart-rending - your ability to share your emotions and memories in such an honest way is truly inspiring.

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  7. leanne can blogSeptember 10, 2013 at 5:51 PM

    I agree with Brenda -so heart rending.
    beautifully written.

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  8. leanne can blogSeptember 10, 2013 at 5:51 PM

    I agree with Brenda -so heart rending.
    beautifully written.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    Such vivid images in those 4 lines of how the viewer perceives the meaning. Nice...

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  10. MarySeptember 11, 2013 at 8:02 AM

    Whew, this is really a strong image here. One really doesn't want to experience kisses like this.

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  11. humbirdSeptember 11, 2013 at 8:18 AM

    Nice combination of photo and poem...doubt so attractive in art...all solutions work...

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:46 AM

    Very poignant poem and image.

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  13. ClaudiaSeptember 13, 2013 at 3:08 PM

    ugh... lies and kisses do not really fit... a kiss for me goes straight to the soul...not a place where i would want the lies hitting me full blow..

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2013 at 10:43 PM

    You communicated the pain and betrayal in a few words. :-)

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