This is just full of awesome word choices. Really excellent, Kathryn.
I agree with MZ--I love your word choices--this is such a tight little write!
Beautiful - serpentine dreams......
Brevity suits this and love undulating...well done!
Thanks Hannah . . . I love the movement that undulating conjures.
Love it! Very well written!
Thank you. :)
cool image and an even cooler pen, Kathryn ~
Thanks Michael, I love creating an image to go with the words I write.
Wonderful blend of abstract and concrete details. I love the sinewy senses.
Thanks Kerry, dreams are a great source of inspiration.
I don't know how you do it everytime - you nail it - and the image, love the processing!
Thanks Kim . . . I love pairing words and images.
Tight little write is a great description ... like a snake coiled, ready to strike! Wonderful!
good write!!! i'm always reading about not showing fear before animals;; 'Have you read Life of Pi', gosh you shouldmuch love...
some cool S work in this...makes like the hiss of the snake as you read it....smiles...had a snake at the house just the other day...
This pic is amazing....and your words fit it well! :-)
Fantastic photo... "undulating consciousness" love that! Such few words, but amazing poetry.
Oh, what a sinister, sensous piece.
nice.. i like the serpentine dreams... beauty and danger in a snake...
*shudder* ... snakes are my worst nightmare
Serpentine dreams and sinewy senses.. Wow