Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Serpentine Dreams



fear forked omens
constrict the mind
extricating sinewy senses

shedding and emerging
intuition strikes
an undulating consciousness
coiled in serpentine dreams

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22 comments:

  1. Maude LynnApril 29, 2014 at 6:04 PM

    This is just full of awesome word choices. Really excellent, Kathryn.

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  2. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerApril 29, 2014 at 6:31 PM

    I agree with MZ--I love your word choices--this is such a tight little write!

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyApril 29, 2014 at 9:08 PM

    Beautiful - serpentine dreams......

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  4. HannahApril 29, 2014 at 11:41 PM

    Brevity suits this and love undulating...well done!

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    1. Kathryn DycheApril 30, 2014 at 11:48 AM

      Thanks Hannah . . . I love the movement that undulating conjures.

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  5. AnonymousApril 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM

    Love it! Very well written!

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  6. AnonymousApril 30, 2014 at 12:16 AM

    cool image and an even cooler pen, Kathryn ~

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    1. Kathryn DycheApril 30, 2014 at 11:47 AM

      Thanks Michael, I love creating an image to go with the words I write.

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  7. Kerry O'ConnorApril 30, 2014 at 4:53 AM

    Wonderful blend of abstract and concrete details. I love the sinewy senses.

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    1. Kathryn DycheApril 30, 2014 at 11:45 AM

      Thanks Kerry, dreams are a great source of inspiration.

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  8. Kim StevensApril 30, 2014 at 9:54 AM

    I don't know how you do it everytime - you nail it - and the image, love the processing!

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    1. Kathryn DycheApril 30, 2014 at 11:46 AM

      Thanks Kim . . . I love pairing words and images.

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  9. HelenApril 30, 2014 at 12:13 PM

    Tight little write is a great description ... like a snake coiled, ready to strike! Wonderful!

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  10. Gillena CoxApril 30, 2014 at 1:04 PM

    good write!!! i'm always reading about not showing fear before animals;; 'Have you read Life of Pi', gosh you should

    much love...

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  11. Brian MillerApril 30, 2014 at 5:09 PM

    some cool S work in this...makes like the hiss of the snake as you read it....smiles...
    had a snake at the house just the other day...

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  12. Carrie Van HornApril 30, 2014 at 7:57 PM

    This pic is amazing....and your words fit it well! :-)

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  13. Susie ClevengerMay 1, 2014 at 12:53 AM

    Fantastic photo... "undulating consciousness" love that! Such few words, but amazing poetry.

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  14. Other MaryMay 1, 2014 at 11:42 AM

    Oh, what a sinister, sensous piece.

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  15. ClaudiaMay 1, 2014 at 1:12 PM

    nice.. i like the serpentine dreams... beauty and danger in a snake...

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  16. KamanaMay 2, 2014 at 12:10 AM

    *shudder* ... snakes are my worst nightmare

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  17. brudbergMay 3, 2014 at 2:24 AM

    Serpentine dreams and sinewy senses.. Wow

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