in the still of time
unnerved
as others pass it by
this is the poem that rises
to the beat of seconds
discarded
in the every minute of every day
this is the poem that falls
through the layers
of yesterdays
and todays
this is the poem that turns
down into feathered wings
healing illusions
as it flies
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WOW!!!!!!! I LOVE this! especially the down turning into feathered wings "healing illusion as it flies". Fantastic write, my friend!
ReplyDeleteKathryn, this is the poem...! That's a stellar use of repetition to create a mood, a statement. The last stanza is my fav. Reversing time.
ReplyDeleteThanks . . . was struggling with the boomerang prompt from the other day but it kind of worked its way into one anyhow.
Deletevery cool kathryn - love all the things it can be and is and how it develops a life on its own as well
ReplyDeleteWhat a great take on the prompt...such a cool perspective.
ReplyDeleteThank you, took me a while to decide where I wanted to go with this.
DeleteSuch a lovely response Kathryn ~ I like the use of repetition and specially the last one - being a feathered wings healing illusions at it flies ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace, I felt like the repetition worked in this piece.
DeleteVery well done! That first stanza really speaks to me--a beautiful image. Great work here!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jeff, it's always great to hear which words/stanzas resonate with people.
DeleteSo many seconds discarded every day. If only we could claim those seconds and change them into minutes, then hours! I really like the way you wrote this poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary . . . yes if only we could claim those precious seconds.
Deleteoh...and how amazingly it soars.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
Deletewhat an amazing poem of truth...'healing illusions'...though feathered but not so soft..
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana . . .
DeleteThis poem is breathtakingly beautiful...! 'Turns down into feathered wings healing illusions as it flies'... such lovely sentiments! Very well written! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you . . . I was struggling with this one for a while.
DeleteNice use of the poem introduced us at the IGWRT's! This has such a soft touch - a simplicity that offers hope.
ReplyDeleteI was trying the boomerang style but couldn't quite get there with it. This was the end product. :)
Deletethis is really beautiful.
ReplyDeletei think it drives home the true meaning of poetry and literature...how timeless the stories of language become. years and decades cannot dim.
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Thank you Stacy
Deletehoping that i dont discard too many seconds in the day without first taking the time to admire them....smiles...intriguing for in this...addressing the poem itself...giving it life....
ReplyDeleteI know I discard too many . . . definitely need to rectify that. I love how observant you are.
DeleteThanks Gina, hope you are well.
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