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It
starts as fascination
Some
flirtation
An
overwhelming sensation
The
feeling of elation
And
expectation
Oh
the anticipation
Then
the hesitation
And
deliberation
The
reservation
Before
the realization
It’s
merely a temptation
And
has no foundation
So
to relieve the frustration
Use
your imagination
And
possibly a little vibration
For
your own salvation
Ha! I love it! Especially the last stanza! ;)
ReplyDelete..the consistence in your ending tone at every line suggests a path that is as if you're telling me to go on... continue reading and figure out... and i like it as the intensity has been quite sustained without losing much the value of your piece thus not at all exaggerating... this is like an anatomy of something to invite curiosity as to the notion of how one comes and become... overall impact of your piece for me is intriguing specially as each line gets down to your final couplet.... i enjoyed the experimental vibe in here... thanks... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThis is fabulous. You go girl.
ReplyDeleteYou clearly have a way with words! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful--light & circular, hitting the theme again and again.
ReplyDeletebetween
the dark and light
she tried to right
the spin
of her coin toss
salvation
If you'd be interested in submitting any of your art or poetry, I'd definitely be interested in having them in Poetry Nook Magazine (https://poetrynook.submittable.com/submit)
(smiling)
ReplyDeletegreat information
stun convention
abandon that junction
retire to your mansion
chasten with moderation
Sure, why not ~ Everything in moderation ~ Smiles ~
ReplyDeleteHappy to see that Frank invited you to the Poetry Nook Magazine ~
Sounds very familiar....thanks for stopping by :)
ReplyDeleteha. i love all your -ations...nice energy in this...a bit sad it is only a temtation without foundation, but then again you still found your way to relief...smiles.
ReplyDeletegreat wordplay and a climactic ending left me shaky with Bambi legs!
ReplyDeleteBambi legs . . . love that.
DeleteThe style of this works very well for me -- and fits perfectly with the visual.
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