I suppose that there are kisses that lie. The bible says that Judas betrayed with a kiss.
a clenched fist, deceit & lies - such memories of the kiss we would rather forget ~ happy day to you, smiles ~
There's a story behind those rhymes... I hope it happened long ago. xo
oh now that end puts a twist on it now doesnt it...first kisses are so full of angst and expectation...there is still magic in them though...smiles.
Your pieces are always so heart-rending - your ability to share your emotions and memories in such an honest way is truly inspiring.
Thanks Brenda, what a lovely compliment.
I agree with Brenda -so heart rending. beautifully written.
Such vivid images in those 4 lines of how the viewer perceives the meaning. Nice...
Whew, this is really a strong image here. One really doesn't want to experience kisses like this.
Nice combination of photo and poem...doubt so attractive in art...all solutions work...
Very poignant poem and image.
ugh... lies and kisses do not really fit... a kiss for me goes straight to the soul...not a place where i would want the lies hitting me full blow..
Kisses and lies ... yes, it happens and it hurts. Betrayal is heart-breaking. The heart has a way of healing itself like a beautiful butterfly, it sets itself free. A touching poem. Thank you for sharing and visiting my blog :)
You communicated the pain and betrayal in a few words. :-)