Thursday, March 13, 2014

Echoes Of Silence


echoes of silence ricochet
with all the accuracy
of an unsighted gun
yet the final impact
remains fatal

9 comments:

  1. This si different for you....makes you think.

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  2. nice extended metaphor....silence can be deadly...
    not easy to deal with in certain situations....
    no target...it takes out many

    what a cool pic too...

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  3. Whew, this is powerful. Unsighted or not, death is death, and final!

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  4. i spent all afternoon yesterday in a class of three year olds, where all the boys were telling me and showing me what happens when someone shoots a gun, and how the effects change depending on where its shot at. (they must watch a lot of television, i am thinking). meanwhile, in a corner, all the girls sat and played with dolls and puzzles.

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  5. A shattering metaphor. Your work continues to grow and mature and I continue to be in awe.

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    1. I often think people find it a little dark but I write what comes. Thanks for seeing growth, I sometimes find myself questioning whether it's there or not.

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  6. I'm scared with the fascination with guns.. And as a metaphor an unsighted gun seems to be one of anger without reason...

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